Writing the pros and cons

Phone calls and email

Topic Sentence: The phone calls and email are a great advance to communication, which changed the life of the people.

Brainstorming:

Phone Calls:

-          -The phone calls are a media of communication for sound waves.

-          -The phone calls are a media of communication that allows us to listen the messages in line.

-          -The communication for calls are faster than emails.

-          -Sometimes the phone calls are cut

Email:

-         - The emails help us improve the communication through texts, pictures, and in some moments videos.

-          -The emails allow us send large text and sometimes are unlimited.

-          -The emails are electronics and it’s created in a computer, tablets or other intelligent devices.

-          - Emails are more commonly used long-distance than Calls

1^st Draft

The phone calls and email are a great advance to communication, which changed the life of the people. Phone calls are a means of communication for sound waver, that allows us communication direct with the other person. Emails help us improve the communication through texts, pictures, and in some moments videos. The phone calls are a mean of communication with more interference than emails, the emails are exacter in the information than phone calls. Sometime the people need to send large information and the best option are emails, through emails the people send large text, pictures and in some moments videos. The Phone calls are generally for shorter messages than emails. The emails are electronics and it’s created in a computer, tablets or other intelligent devices. Finally, the phone calls are a means of communication faster than emails but it’s generally for short messages.

2nd Draft

The phone calls and e-mails are a great advance to communication, which changed the life of the people. Phone calls are a media of communication for sound waver, that allows us communication direct with the other person. E-mails help us improve the communication through texts, pictures, and in some moments videos. The phone calls are media of communication with more trouble than e-mails; the emails are exacter in the information than phone calls. Sometime the people need to send large information and the best option are e-mails, for example: pictures, videos and web pages’ links. The emails are electronics and it’s created in a computer, tablets or other intelligent devices. The Phone calls are generally for shorter messages than e-mails. Finally, the phone calls are a media of communication generally faster and more specific than e-mails.

Final Draft

The phone calls and emails are a great advance to communication, which changed the life of the people. An advantage phone calls are the communication for sound waver and we can communication directly with the other person, also, there are many operators which can be accessed easily from anywhere in the world. On the other hand, Emails help us improve the communication through texts, pictures, and in some moments videos, also, Sometime the people need to send large information and the best option are emails, for example: large reports, pictures, videos and web pages’ links. The Phone calls aren’t generally used for long messages and we can’t send pictures or videos. Finally, the phone calls are a media of communication generally faster and more specific than emails.

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Author & Editor

Electronic engineering student. University: Pontificia Universidad Javeriana Cali.